tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post6066027732649780522..comments2024-02-28T22:27:44.676-06:00Comments on Sue Barr : WEEKEND WRITING WARRIORS #27Sue Barrhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06347249118943488564noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-60102035312421121922017-04-19T23:18:58.498-05:002017-04-19T23:18:58.498-05:00The plot thickens. I know, corny and a cliche.But ...The plot thickens. I know, corny and a cliche.But it fits. Everything is coming to a head.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-68845405084930352032017-04-17T18:35:39.890-05:002017-04-17T18:35:39.890-05:00Seems he has his hands full even before adding a f...Seems he has his hands full even before adding a female wrench.Kimberly Gouldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623715828708451552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-41322404151724052592017-04-17T18:06:10.855-05:002017-04-17T18:06:10.855-05:00You're right, introducing spies and Bonaparte ...You're right, introducing spies and Bonaparte makes the possible plot bunnies multiple like, well, like bunnies.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-76713902743969426782017-04-17T00:30:22.896-05:002017-04-17T00:30:22.896-05:00Great snippet, easy to vizualise. :DGreat snippet, easy to vizualise. :DAmy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-47983354602242915502017-04-16T13:43:16.434-05:002017-04-16T13:43:16.434-05:00Setting things up very nicely for a shake up, Sue....Setting things up very nicely for a shake up, Sue. Can't wait to find out what (or who) is in store for our hero.Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-35179184878466924142017-04-16T10:10:29.439-05:002017-04-16T10:10:29.439-05:00I have a feeling George will find or fall into oth...I have a feeling George will find or fall into other worthy uses of his time! But always good to meet the love interest...enjoyed the snippet.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-43108517991101337292017-04-16T06:40:11.848-05:002017-04-16T06:40:11.848-05:00Well written. Your descriptions are right on. Yes,...Well written. Your descriptions are right on. Yes, love interest would be nice.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-68041725184174637362017-04-15T22:33:34.516-05:002017-04-15T22:33:34.516-05:00Thank you. I love writing dialogue and have to wor...Thank you. I love writing dialogue and have to work to pad the rest of my story.<br />Sue Barrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06347249118943488564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-58785805167242299342017-04-15T19:24:44.183-05:002017-04-15T19:24:44.183-05:00Nice snippet! I really liked how you used body lan...Nice snippet! I really liked how you used body language in this scene. :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com