tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post7259741450981038430..comments2024-02-28T22:27:44.676-06:00Comments on Sue Barr : WEEKEND WRITING WARRIORS #18Sue Barrhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06347249118943488564noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-29690034623379257722017-02-16T20:25:40.470-06:002017-02-16T20:25:40.470-06:00Well, he loves her. That's a good start. The...Well, he loves her. That's a good start. The rest, um... needs some work... PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-50706772166812118552017-02-12T16:47:28.222-06:002017-02-12T16:47:28.222-06:00Yeah, I think I would've called him on his ins...Yeah, I think I would've called him on his insults and suggest that he come to terms with his disdain for his feelings. Good snippet, Sue.Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-22470012534427919112017-02-12T13:55:20.683-06:002017-02-12T13:55:20.683-06:00Lord Nathan does have a propensity for speaking th...Lord Nathan does have a propensity for speaking the truth, although not always at appropriate times.Sue Barrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06347249118943488564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-10888619475665227352017-02-12T13:42:17.621-06:002017-02-12T13:42:17.621-06:00I'll give him props for trying. Doesn't me...I'll give him props for trying. Doesn't mean I think it should stick! Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-62756807873399527962017-02-12T13:10:49.241-06:002017-02-12T13:10:49.241-06:00So far I can't see his speech making her leap ...So far I can't see his speech making her leap into his arms. He better get down to some romancy business pretty darn quick.Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-14173530449891763232017-02-12T10:41:11.712-06:002017-02-12T10:41:11.712-06:00I wonder what she'll say. Great tease.I wonder what she'll say. Great tease.Kimberly Gouldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623715828708451552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-85115219696774081072017-02-12T08:59:46.441-06:002017-02-12T08:59:46.441-06:00I'm afraid he's hopeless. The man does not...I'm afraid he's hopeless. The man does not know how to propose. Do you think it's a fatal flaw?Sue Barrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06347249118943488564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-26144889798266420982017-02-12T08:55:59.573-06:002017-02-12T08:55:59.573-06:00Run from this awkward proposal. In too many words ...Run from this awkward proposal. In too many words it's almost an insult. I'd smack right in the face!Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-36661420187702034102017-02-12T08:54:03.846-06:002017-02-12T08:54:03.846-06:00So far he's not doing too great IMHO, just lik...So far he's not doing too great IMHO, just like Darcy's first attempt. I hope he figures it out in the rest of the proposal!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-14134916524341721672017-02-12T08:02:54.784-06:002017-02-12T08:02:54.784-06:00Yes. He wouldn't win any points with me either...Yes. He wouldn't win any points with me either - and I wrote him! HA!Sue Barrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06347249118943488564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-83340608569655779012017-02-12T01:07:36.955-06:002017-02-12T01:07:36.955-06:00So far, this proposal is not guaranteed to win the...So far, this proposal is not guaranteed to win the grand prize of "Yes". I trust he'll get better at it, though.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com